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A/C.3/32/WG.l!CRP.l 24 October 1977 ORI GINAL: : ENGLISH
Thirty-second session Agenda i tern 85 UNITED NATIONS DECADE FOR AND PEACE
EQUALITY, DEVELOPMENT
DRAFT CONVENTION ONTRE ELIMINATION OF DISCRIMINATION AGAINST WOMEIIJ LIST OF AMENDMENTS AND VERSIONS PROPOSED WITH RESPECT TO THE PREAMBLE AND ARTICLES OF THE DRAFT CONVENTION ON THE ELIMINATION OF DISCRIMINA'I'ION AGAINST WOMEN, CONTAINED IN THE SECRETARY.-GENERAL'S REPORT A/32/218 and Add.1 PREAMBLE
Paragraph 2 UNESCO
a new paragraph to be (doe. A/32/218 - Annex r)
USSR
(amendment) - doe. A/32/218 -Annex r
Byelorussian SSR
a new version of paragraph 3 (doe. A/32/218- Add; 1 paragraph 9)
Paragraph 4 -
paragraph 2;
none
Paragraph 5 Byelorussian SSH and Ukrainian SSR
amendment (dcc. A/32/218 -Add. 1 paragraph 10)
USSR
amendment (doe. A/32/21-8 .:: Annex I)
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Paragraph 6 -
none
Paragraph 7 -
none
Ukrainian SSR
amendment (doe. A/32/218/add. 1 paragraph 12)
USSR
3 amendments (doe. A/32/218 Annex r)
Byelorussian SSR
new version - (doe. A/32/218/Add.l paragraph 13)
Paragraph 9 Ukrainian SSR
amendment (doe. A/32/218/Add. 1 paragraph 15)
USSR
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex r )
Paragraph 10 Sweden
an amendment and a new paragraph to be added (doe. A/32/2l8 Add. 16)
UNESCO
an
Article
Annex r)
1
Netherlands
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex r)
UNESCO
two amendments (doe. A/32/218 Annex 1)
Article 2 Introductory phrase USSR
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex r)
Byelorussian SSR
new version (doe. A/32/218/Add. 1 paragraph 19)
Article 2, paragraph (a) ., ' Austria
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex r)
UNESCO
amendment (A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 2, paragraph (b) Austria Japan
, amendment (doe. A/32/2l8' Annex I) amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex r)
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Article 2)
UNESCO
a.mendment (doe. A/32/2l8 Annex I)
Article 2, paragraph (e) New Zealand
amendment (doc, A/32/218 Annex I)
United States of America
amendment (doe. A/32/2l8 Annex I)
Article 2, paragraph (f) UNESCO Article 3 -
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I) none
Article 4, paragraph (2) UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/2l8 Annex I)
Article 5 Austria
new version (doe. A/32/2l8 Annex I)
Article 5, paragraph 2 Sweden
amencnent (doe, A/32/2l8/Add. 1 paragraph 23)
Dnited States of America
amendment (doe. A/32/2l8 paragraph 46)
UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/2l8 Annex I)
Article 6 United Kingdom
new version (doe. A/32/2l8 Add. 1 paragraph 25)
Argentina
amendment (doe.
1 paragraph 26)
Article 8, paragraph (a) UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/2l8 Annex I)
Article 8 2 paragraph (b) Austria
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
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Byelorussian SSR
amendment (doe. A/32!218/Add.l paragraph 27)
USSR
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 9 2 paragraph 2 amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Austria Article 10 Introductory phrase Argentina
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Add. 1 paragraph 35)
United States of America
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
WHO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 10, paragraph (a) Austria
UNESCO
new version (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
(doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 10, paragraph (b) Japan
UNESCO
new paragraEh to be added (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
(doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 10, paragraph (c) amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Austria
Arti81e 10, paragraph (e) 'amer,d..'-rrent (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
la, paragraph (f)
Argentina
United Kingdom
amendment (doe. A/32/2l8 Add. 1 paragraph 38)
(doe. A/32/218 Add. 1 paragraph 37)
Article 10, paragraph (g) New Zealand
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
UNESCO
additional article on cultural rights
/ ...
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11, paragraph (1)
1
amendment (doe. A/32/218/Add. 1 paragraph 40)
WHO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 paragraph 87)
new version (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 11. paragraph 1 (b) Argentina
amendment (doe. A/32/218/Add. 1 paragraph 41)
Article 11, paragraph 1 (c) Un i ted Kingdom
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Add. 1 paragraph 42)
Netherlands
to be added as paragraph·l (g) (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 11, pe,ragraph 2 (a)
Japan
Article 11, paragraph 2 Japan
Kingdom
(doe. A/32/218 paragraph 93)
(doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
(doe. A/32/21B/Add. 1 paragraph 43)
(doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
11, paragraph 2 (c)
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Jr:.n:m
WHO
(doe. A/32/218 Annex r)
(doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
(doe. A/32/21B Annex I)
amendment (doe. A/32/21B paragraph 98)
Article 12, paragraph
New Zealand
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
WHO
new version (doe. A/32/218 Annex. I)
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two alternative versions of the paragraph are proposed .(doe. A/32/218 Annex I) amendment (doe. A/32/ 218 Annex I)
Article 13, paragraph 4 Netherlands
amendment (doe Annex 1)
UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 14, paragraph 2 UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 15, paragraph 1 (d) Argentina
amendment (doc . A/32/218/Add -, 1 paragraph 54)
Article 15, paragraph 1 (e) UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 15, paragraph 1 (f) Bahrain
new version (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 15 2 paragraph 1 (g) UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 15, paragraph 1 (h) Japan
amendment (doe. A/32/218 paragraph 132)
Article 15. paragraph 3 UNESCO
new version (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 16 UNESCO
new version (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
110
new version (doe. A/32/218 paragraph 143)
A new article to be added United Kingdom
(doe. A/32!2l8!Add. 1 paragraph 56)
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amendment (doe. A/32/218 paragraph 145)
Article 18 -
none
Article 19, paragraph 1 UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I) 19, paragraph 2 (a)
New Zealand
amendment (doe. A/32/21B paragraph 154)
Article 19, paragraph 3 Norway
amendment (doc , A/32/21B/Add. 1 paragraph 61)
UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 19, paragraph 7 UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
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A/C.3/32/WG.l!CRP.l 24 October 1977 ORI GINAL: : ENGLISH
Thirty-second session Agenda i tern 85 UNITED NATIONS DECADE FOR AND PEACE
EQUALITY, DEVELOPMENT
DRAFT CONVENTION ONTRE ELIMINATION OF DISCRIMINATION AGAINST WOMEIIJ LIST OF AMENDMENTS AND VERSIONS PROPOSED WITH RESPECT TO THE PREAMBLE AND ARTICLES OF THE DRAFT CONVENTION ON THE ELIMINATION OF DISCRIMINA'I'ION AGAINST WOMEN, CONTAINED IN THE SECRETARY.-GENERAL'S REPORT A/32/218 and Add.1 PREAMBLE
Paragraph 2 UNESCO
a new paragraph to be (doe. A/32/218 - Annex r)
USSR
(amendment) - doe. A/32/218 -Annex r
Byelorussian SSR
a new version of paragraph 3 (doe. A/32/218- Add; 1 paragraph 9)
Paragraph 4 -
paragraph 2;
none
Paragraph 5 Byelorussian SSH and Ukrainian SSR
amendment (dcc. A/32/218 -Add. 1 paragraph 10)
USSR
amendment (doe. A/32/21-8 .:: Annex I)
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Paragraph 6 -
none
Paragraph 7 -
none
Ukrainian SSR
amendment (doe. A/32/218/add. 1 paragraph 12)
USSR
3 amendments (doe. A/32/218 Annex r)
Byelorussian SSR
new version - (doe. A/32/218/Add.l paragraph 13)
Paragraph 9 Ukrainian SSR
amendment (doe. A/32/218/Add. 1 paragraph 15)
USSR
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex r )
Paragraph 10 Sweden
an amendment and a new paragraph to be added (doe. A/32/2l8 Add. 16)
UNESCO
an
Article
Annex r)
1
Netherlands
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex r)
UNESCO
two amendments (doe. A/32/218 Annex 1)
Article 2 Introductory phrase USSR
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex r)
Byelorussian SSR
new version (doe. A/32/218/Add. 1 paragraph 19)
Article 2, paragraph (a) ., ' Austria
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex r)
UNESCO
amendment (A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 2, paragraph (b) Austria Japan
, amendment (doe. A/32/2l8' Annex I) amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex r)
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Article 2)
UNESCO
a.mendment (doe. A/32/2l8 Annex I)
Article 2, paragraph (e) New Zealand
amendment (doc, A/32/218 Annex I)
United States of America
amendment (doe. A/32/2l8 Annex I)
Article 2, paragraph (f) UNESCO Article 3 -
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I) none
Article 4, paragraph (2) UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/2l8 Annex I)
Article 5 Austria
new version (doe. A/32/2l8 Annex I)
Article 5, paragraph 2 Sweden
amencnent (doe, A/32/2l8/Add. 1 paragraph 23)
Dnited States of America
amendment (doe. A/32/2l8 paragraph 46)
UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/2l8 Annex I)
Article 6 United Kingdom
new version (doe. A/32/2l8 Add. 1 paragraph 25)
Argentina
amendment (doe.
1 paragraph 26)
Article 8, paragraph (a) UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/2l8 Annex I)
Article 8 2 paragraph (b) Austria
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
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Byelorussian SSR
amendment (doe. A/32!218/Add.l paragraph 27)
USSR
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 9 2 paragraph 2 amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Austria Article 10 Introductory phrase Argentina
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Add. 1 paragraph 35)
United States of America
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
WHO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 10, paragraph (a) Austria
UNESCO
new version (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
(doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 10, paragraph (b) Japan
UNESCO
new paragraEh to be added (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
(doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 10, paragraph (c) amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Austria
Arti81e 10, paragraph (e) 'amer,d..'-rrent (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
la, paragraph (f)
Argentina
United Kingdom
amendment (doe. A/32/2l8 Add. 1 paragraph 38)
(doe. A/32/218 Add. 1 paragraph 37)
Article 10, paragraph (g) New Zealand
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
UNESCO
additional article on cultural rights
/ ...
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11, paragraph (1)
1
amendment (doe. A/32/218/Add. 1 paragraph 40)
WHO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 paragraph 87)
new version (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 11. paragraph 1 (b) Argentina
amendment (doe. A/32/218/Add. 1 paragraph 41)
Article 11, paragraph 1 (c) Un i ted Kingdom
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Add. 1 paragraph 42)
Netherlands
to be added as paragraph·l (g) (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 11, pe,ragraph 2 (a)
Japan
Article 11, paragraph 2 Japan
Kingdom
(doe. A/32/218 paragraph 93)
(doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
(doe. A/32/21B/Add. 1 paragraph 43)
(doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
11, paragraph 2 (c)
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Jr:.n:m
WHO
(doe. A/32/218 Annex r)
(doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
(doe. A/32/21B Annex I)
amendment (doe. A/32/21B paragraph 98)
Article 12, paragraph
New Zealand
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
WHO
new version (doe. A/32/218 Annex. I)
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two alternative versions of the paragraph are proposed .(doe. A/32/218 Annex I) amendment (doe. A/32/ 218 Annex I)
Article 13, paragraph 4 Netherlands
amendment (doe Annex 1)
UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 14, paragraph 2 UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 15, paragraph 1 (d) Argentina
amendment (doc . A/32/218/Add -, 1 paragraph 54)
Article 15, paragraph 1 (e) UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 15, paragraph 1 (f) Bahrain
new version (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 15 2 paragraph 1 (g) UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 15, paragraph 1 (h) Japan
amendment (doe. A/32/218 paragraph 132)
Article 15. paragraph 3 UNESCO
new version (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 16 UNESCO
new version (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
110
new version (doe. A/32/218 paragraph 143)
A new article to be added United Kingdom
(doe. A/32!2l8!Add. 1 paragraph 56)
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amendment (doe. A/32/218 paragraph 145)
Article 18 -
none
Article 19, paragraph 1 UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I) 19, paragraph 2 (a)
New Zealand
amendment (doe. A/32/21B paragraph 154)
Article 19, paragraph 3 Norway
amendment (doc , A/32/21B/Add. 1 paragraph 61)
UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 19, paragraph 7 UNESCO
amendment (doe. A/32/218 Annex I)
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