MyCom TT outline 3
OUTLINE Open-field night
1. The camera is low in tall dry grass. A streak of light crosses the sky and then the ground shakes as we see a flash in the distance. We hear low rumble. The camera tracks in through the grass.
2. A man steps towards a bright glowing light. The camera moves up.
3. In the foreground we see a smoking cater. The price tag slowly rise up out of the smoking crater. The camera moves down.
4. Over a man’s shoulder we see the flashing Internet Price slowly getting up in the crater as the smoke clears. The price flickers as it looks a little week. The camera pushes forward.
5. The man reaches down to help the price tag up. The price tag moves towards him. The camera tracks right.
6. In a wide shot the car leaves with the glowing price in the back seat. The price tag looks around. The camera moves up.
7. Cut to the price in the back of a car driving down the road at night. We follow the car.
Neighborhood night 8. A young boy on a bike watches the pick up truck and Internet price drive by in amazement. The camera tracks left.
9. He tries to ride hard to catch up with the truck. The camera pushes in.
10. At a stop light the car pulls up next to another car.
11. In the car a group of teenagers looks at the Internet price in awe and then get excited.
12. a man with on the street tries to hold his dog back as it barks at the price tag.
13. From inside the car we see that the farmer smile to himself as looks towards the back seat and drives on.
Exterior of building night 14. The pick-up pulls up in front of a strange building.
Interior of Building 15. Inside the building a random assortment of everyday people are gathered in a strange white space. Everyone stops what they are doing and pauses as we follow the farmer as he leads the Internet price into the room. A woman begins to slow clap. Soon everyone in the room is all clapping. The camera tracks in.
16. In a reverse shot we see the farmer. The camera tracks in.
17. This celebration gets bigger, people begin to hug each other as the farmer and the price make their way to the center. The camera tracks right.
18. At the center of the room three identical men with different color matching uniforms are waiting and clapping. They pat the farmer on the back.
19. Everyone embraces the Internet price in the center. The camera tracks back.
20. In a tighter shot we see the triplets hugging the price tag.
The glorifying release of the complaint being stuck in a telephone line. Outline
1. In a close shot we see a telephone. The camera tracks down a table as and along the wall as it follows the phone line. The phone line starts to get larger and larger and the camera stops when it look like the line is a snake that has just eaten a large dog.
2. Cut to a wide shot of the living room where we see the large lump in the phone line. The lump rumbles and makes a weird gurgling noise. Each one of the triplets now enter the room, each in his own way. One triplet emerges from the couch cushions, one crawls out from a cabinet, and the last triplet emerges when we see a painting on the wall swing to one side and he steps through a hole in the wall. Each triplet holds a different object. One has a pair of scissors, one has brick and window, and the last has cup of warm coffee. ( we could also just have the triplets just enter the room from off frame but this could be a fun/ unexpected entrance) .
3. We punch in to a closer shot where we see all three triplets staring at the lump which is now emitting low growl.
4. In a close shot one of the triplets uses his scissors to cut open the telephone line. As he does black smoke comes out.
5. Back in a wide shot the three triplets help an amorphous black form out of the line. It seems agitated and unruly. It growls and rumbles even more than before.
6. In a medium shot one of the triplets hands the black blob a brick as he holds the window with the help of another triplet. The blob pinches the brick between two of its extremities. 7. In shot over the blobs shoulder we see it through the brick through the window breaking it. It seems really worked up as it makes frustrated growl. 8. In wide shot it pants and slowly seems to calm down. It turns from black to more of a dark grey. One of the triplets offers it the cup of steaming coffee. 9. In a medium shot the triplets all gather around and give the blob a group hug. It now turns warm red and makes purring sound.
1. The camera is low in tall dry grass. A streak of light crosses the sky and then the ground shakes as we see a flash in the distance. We hear low rumble. The camera tracks in through the grass.
2. A man steps towards a bright glowing light. The camera moves up.
3. In the foreground we see a smoking cater. The price tag slowly rise up out of the smoking crater. The camera moves down.
4. Over a man’s shoulder we see the flashing Internet Price slowly getting up in the crater as the smoke clears. The price flickers as it looks a little week. The camera pushes forward.
5. The man reaches down to help the price tag up. The price tag moves towards him. The camera tracks right.
6. In a wide shot the car leaves with the glowing price in the back seat. The price tag looks around. The camera moves up.
7. Cut to the price in the back of a car driving down the road at night. We follow the car.
Neighborhood night 8. A young boy on a bike watches the pick up truck and Internet price drive by in amazement. The camera tracks left.
9. He tries to ride hard to catch up with the truck. The camera pushes in.
10. At a stop light the car pulls up next to another car.
11. In the car a group of teenagers looks at the Internet price in awe and then get excited.
12. a man with on the street tries to hold his dog back as it barks at the price tag.
13. From inside the car we see that the farmer smile to himself as looks towards the back seat and drives on.
Exterior of building night 14. The pick-up pulls up in front of a strange building.
Interior of Building 15. Inside the building a random assortment of everyday people are gathered in a strange white space. Everyone stops what they are doing and pauses as we follow the farmer as he leads the Internet price into the room. A woman begins to slow clap. Soon everyone in the room is all clapping. The camera tracks in.
16. In a reverse shot we see the farmer. The camera tracks in.
17. This celebration gets bigger, people begin to hug each other as the farmer and the price make their way to the center. The camera tracks right.
18. At the center of the room three identical men with different color matching uniforms are waiting and clapping. They pat the farmer on the back.
19. Everyone embraces the Internet price in the center. The camera tracks back.
20. In a tighter shot we see the triplets hugging the price tag.
The glorifying release of the complaint being stuck in a telephone line. Outline
1. In a close shot we see a telephone. The camera tracks down a table as and along the wall as it follows the phone line. The phone line starts to get larger and larger and the camera stops when it look like the line is a snake that has just eaten a large dog.
2. Cut to a wide shot of the living room where we see the large lump in the phone line. The lump rumbles and makes a weird gurgling noise. Each one of the triplets now enter the room, each in his own way. One triplet emerges from the couch cushions, one crawls out from a cabinet, and the last triplet emerges when we see a painting on the wall swing to one side and he steps through a hole in the wall. Each triplet holds a different object. One has a pair of scissors, one has brick and window, and the last has cup of warm coffee. ( we could also just have the triplets just enter the room from off frame but this could be a fun/ unexpected entrance) .
3. We punch in to a closer shot where we see all three triplets staring at the lump which is now emitting low growl.
4. In a close shot one of the triplets uses his scissors to cut open the telephone line. As he does black smoke comes out.
5. Back in a wide shot the three triplets help an amorphous black form out of the line. It seems agitated and unruly. It growls and rumbles even more than before.
6. In a medium shot one of the triplets hands the black blob a brick as he holds the window with the help of another triplet. The blob pinches the brick between two of its extremities. 7. In shot over the blobs shoulder we see it through the brick through the window breaking it. It seems really worked up as it makes frustrated growl. 8. In wide shot it pants and slowly seems to calm down. It turns from black to more of a dark grey. One of the triplets offers it the cup of steaming coffee. 9. In a medium shot the triplets all gather around and give the blob a group hug. It now turns warm red and makes purring sound.
